The smell of green grass during spring flowed through his nostrils, bringing a flood of memories from another time, another place. The blades caressing Tim’s face were soothing, almost hypnotic as buried visions sprang forth from the shadows of his mind.
Tim was a 32 year old family man. He had been married for 5 years to the love of his life, Laura, or Lulu as he liked to call her. They had a 3 year old daughter, Paula who seemed to be morphing into another little Lulu with each passing day. Tim worked at the local Wal-Mart as an Assistant Manager, and was taking night classes to complete his Bachelor’s.
Today, the green grass promised to wipe away his anxieties and daily worries, he just laid there.
The Smell of Green Grass
What does the smell of green grass mean to you?
“Is that an ant?”
It looked so big and full of life as it haphazardly walked past his face carrying a morsel of food in its mouth. He was unable to remember the last time he had noticed ants.
“The birds, they sound so beautiful,” Tim thought as chirping rang out from nearby trees.
As the singing birds flowed into the background, the memories of a child took center stage. Recalling how he used to love to play outside with his old companion, Diesel. Diesel was his first and only pet dog. A mutt, really, but for 7 years he was his best friend.
He missed how they used to run around, rolling on green grass. The incessant licks thrown towards his face would lead to laughter. Tim’s memories of times like this had been buried for so long he was surprised that they even existed.
“Am I dreaming? Or did that really happen?” His mind was speaking to his heart now.
Then a spider, just a daddy long legs really, walked into his vision. The green grass was clearing the cob webs from his memories. Lulu appeared, along with her absolute fear of anything with eight legs. He had been called to her rescue many times to ensure a swift death to any spider that crossed her path. The sound of a toilet flushing would normally be the death call for the invaders. Today though, he was at peace with the little creature. Watching it as it crossed the green grass and out of his sight.
Tim lay there with the wondrous smell and sight of the green grass as a slight breeze brought with it the rise of goose bumps on his skin. He remembered how he had goose bumps while his wife gave birth to Paula. They were so big, as if they were draining his brain from its life giving blood. Tim had almost fainted back then. That feeling was since lost, but at that moment it was back. Tim lay there staring at the green grass, reliving the wonderful birth of his daughter.
“I love them so much.” He thought.
Tim’s body was so relaxed lying in the green grass; he had to fight to stay awake. It required effort to keep from losing consciousness, but he wanted to take in all the memories he could.
One side of Tim’s face was tickled by the blades of green grass while the other side could feel the soft touch of rain drops. The wetness streamed down his face and onto his lips. The taste was refreshing as he swished his tongue around the inside of his cheeks.
In a flash, a memorable vision burst forth in color. It was a picnic he and Lulu had been on almost 6 years earlier. He didn’t notice the smell of green grass back then, or the ants, or the spiders, or anything from his past. This was the day Tim was only focused on the future, the day he proposed with a $50.00 ring. She said she would be his lady until the end of time, and it began to rain. They sat in the rain together, kissing that day until a rainbow appeared.
The smell of the green grass had been a blessing for Tim. It reminded him of what life was all about. It wasn’t the job he had, what car he drove, or how much money he had or didn’t have. The green grass reminded him that life was about relationships, nature, loving and being loved.
Tim lay in the green grass with eyes shut and a smile across his face. The green grass saved Tim, as he succumbed to unconsciousness.
Minutes later, Lulu and little Paula ran to his side. Sirens and people approached the scene. The Emergency Response personnel hovered over Tim’s motionless body, clearing the blood from his mouth as the police interviewed a grief stricken Laura.
Earlier that day, the three had been out walking in a semi-remote field. They were out to collect flowers for the house, take pictures of the area, and just enjoy being together.
Tears streamed down Laura’s face as she recounted how two men had approached, one had a handgun. They robbed the couple, and instructed Tim to bind his daughter, and then let Laura bind him. They were going to rape Laura and murder the trio afterwards. At least that is what Tim had overheard and relayed to his wife.
Tim knew what the cost of saving his family would be, but nothing was more important. Tim passed a happy man.
This is a fictional short-short story.
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Tim was a man of worth.
I would like to think that if I were in that position that I would have done just like Tim. Good stuff!
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Omword Big Guy…Sad and Beautiful….I hope you’re saving these somewhere?!!!!
hughugs
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You are really good. I liked your blog but I didn’t expect these excellent writing and unbelievable stories. This is a real pleasure, And the links, they’ll take you to other wonderful reading. Amazing and thank you.
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There you go again with another excellent story. Somehow as I was reading I sensed that it was not going to turn out well. I could almost feel Tim’s life was flashing before his eyes.
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Tim was a mighty big man. Tomorrow, when MY man mows the grass? Maybe we will both look for ants and spiders…
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As a father and husband that is quite terrifying, and epically moving. These stories you’re producing, they grab my attention like nothing else. Riveting style.
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Another brilliant story from your brilliant mind.
I kept hoping it wasn’t his life flashing before his eyes, but he did die for a good cause, didn’t he? 
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Mo said it best, I’ll only add that once again, I’m jealous.
You’re just getting too good!
UP
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Oh, another good one! So sad, but beautiful at the same time. Excellent! -T
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Love these stories you’re doing!
christina ~ Yes, he definitely was a man of worth.
otin ~ I think we all would like to act as Tim, put in that position. Most would, I believe.
Donna ~ I back up my entire site at least once a week.
Ocean Girl ~ I enjoy reading about your trips, and your beautiful pictures. Thank you.
ann ~ Glad you liked it. I believe it turned out well, as he was at peace knowing his family was safe, and he had nothing but good memories to carry him away.
Martie ~ Also listen for the birds.
Stacy ~ Your making me blush…Yes, he gave his life to save the people he loved, definitely a good cause.
Mad Dog ~ Glad to hear your enjoying my fiction as well as I enjoy your writings.
UP ~ Thank you sir.
Tammy ~ Thank you for the compliment.
Blond Duck ~ Glad you’re enjoying them.
I’m married to someone like Tim. I have no doubt he would put is life on the line for myself and my daughter. I’ve seen him do it for strangers.
nice. thanks for popping in yesterday. this is good stuff…and i would like to think i would do the same, but i guess its easy to say when you are not there..
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Whoooo. Tough ending. But it was really good writing because I was caught up in the story and felt bad that the husband/father acted bravely and then died.
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Man, another great one! All of your short stories make me stop and think for a while!
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I keep thinking one of your stories isn’t just going to rip the heart out of my chest, but they always do. Brilliant, as usual.
This was lovely. Everyone can relate to the lazy, peace of innocence that simple things like, lying in grass can evoke. I totally remember watching clouds on the front lawn as a child–for seemingly endless chunks of time. I can’t recall tha last time I noticed ants in a non-kill-the-ones-in-my-kitchen sort of way. Time to get back to lying in grass. Sigh.
Thanks for stopping by my blog. (=
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Wow, what an unexpected twist! Excellent writing. I really enjoyed it. I read a few of your other posts too. I will definitely be stopping by again. Thanks for popping into my blog! Come back soon.
All ~ Thanks for stopping by, glad to hear you liked this shorty of a story.
Unknown Mami ~ You must be married to a very special man.
brian ~ I like to think that most would do what is necessary to protect the people they love, without thinking or regrets. With a name like brian, I’m equally sure you would.
Kari Anne ~ Right on…hopefully not too much, though.
Technobabe ~ I think this ending was the toughest so far, for me anyways.
Megan ~ Now your making me feel bad.
Jojomama ~ It really is amazing how many activities we loose as we grow older, time constraints and responsibilities makes it even more difficult to just be a kid sometimes.
Margie Jordan ~ Feel free to stop by anytime.
I wasn’t expecting that at all. Somehow I still felt peace at the end. Lovely
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Wow! This just shows how we don’t fully understand what we have until that moment…then it all becomes clear….Great story!
Chili con queso enchiladas are one of the best things ever.
good writing i like the laying in the grass image -
it makes me wonder what the end will be like – don’t worry i’m in no rush and plan to take plenty of time wondering
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“..or how much money he had or didn’t have. The green grass reminded him that life was about relationships, nature, loving and being loved.”
You really had me there. all wrapped up in that feel good zone – before you clean went and kicked the legs out from under me, that is! Sheesh, so you are a writer, too? (Silly smile plastered all over my face.)
Perhaps, one day I’ll show you mine, since you have shown me yours.. maybe. (So delighted to find you are a wordsmith.)
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Love the new header – amazing.
@All ~ I was actually playing with my dog, rolling around in the grass when I thought to myself…”when was the last time I did this?” I couldn’t remember!
You have a very impressive website…..good pictures great writing……..I’ve enjoyed my visit and will return!
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unbeatable story by a wise mind,
Happy Saturday!
@Carol & jingle ~ Welcome and thanks.
So happy to see your face in my comment box again!
howdy!
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So sad. How do you always draw people in so much in such a short story?! You have a gift
Thank you for the wonderful compliment Skye!
That was brilliant. Loved it.
Um, any idea where I can find a Tim?
He’s replying to your comment now.